Homework 8.3
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think about Japanese fashion, music, movies, and manga?
: There were no many ways to contact Japanese culture. But I started to watch Japanese animation, I could experience some feelings of Japan. Japanese foods are not my type but I think music and manga, animation is really great. Especially, I felt amazing when I saw the video of Japanese voice actor.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Michelle! ^^
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Enjoy your weekend! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
There were no many ways to contact Japanese culture.
>> There were a few ways to learn about Japanese culture.
But I started to watch Japanese animation, I could experience some feelings of Japan.
>> CORRECT!
Japanese foods are not my type but I think music and manga, animation is really great.
>> Japanese foods are not my type, but I think music, manga, and animation are great.
Especially, I felt amazing when I saw the video of Japanese voice actor.
>> Especially, I felt amazing when I saw the video of a Japanese voice actor.
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