Homework 8.30
학생이 쓴 원문
What images spring to mind when you hear the word ‘competition’?
Are you a competitive person? Why/why not?
: I can say I am a competitive person confidently. I almost participate in most of school\'s contests. Competition is an experience that allows us to grow. Each competition experience made me grow up. I like competition and the process that I practice repeatedly to win the game.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
I can say I am a competitive person confidently.
>> I can confidently say that I am a competitive person.
I almost participate in most of school\'s contests.
>> I almost participate in most of the school\'s contests.
Competition is an experience that allows us to grow.
>> CORRECT!
Each competition experience made me grow up.
>> Each competition experience made me grow.
I like competition and the process that I practice repeatedly to win the game.
>> I like participating in competitions and the process that I have to practice repeatedly to win the game.
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