HOMEWORK 8/31, About getting job in Korea.

Dear [Name].

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I always cheer for your efforts.
>>I always cheer up for your efforts.

Getting a job in Korea must be considered before and after the IMF crisis.

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Before the IMF, it is easy to get a job after one\'s university graduation.

>>Before the IMF, it is easy to get a job after graduating in university.

>>Before the IMF, it is easy to get a job after graduation.

In case of a prestigious university, that was especially easy before graduation.

>>If you will graduate in a prestigious university, it will definitely be easy.
Then it could be fully enjoy the college life without worrying about employment.

>>Then you could fully enjoy college life without having to worry about employment.
But, Since thr IMF , there was difficult as picking a star of sky.

>>But from the time IMF came, it was difficult to pick a star on the sky.
So they have to study hard to get a job since freshman year in college.

>>As a result, they have to study hard as a freshman in colloger in order to get a job in the future.
Students can not afford to enjoy the romance of college.

>>Students can\'t afford to enjoy the romantic life in college.
To save a specication different with others, They have go to study abroad, and they have to prepare for employment through temporary absence of one year.

>>To save a different specification with others, they have to go abroad to study and to prepare themselves for employment thus they need to temporarily stop school in a year.
what a poor youth !
>>What a poor adulthood!
The students who criticize the government , or have a resistance for reform society are gradually decreasing.

>>Students who are criticizing and resisting the reform of the government are gradually decreasing.
I think the young man is the protagonist of the future.

>>I think the young generation are protagonists of the future.
The future of Korea is bleak indeed.

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I do not know what to do to overcome this impasse.

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