Homework(8/31): Rewriting correctly

2016-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear sam. I had to go working earlier due to urgent meeting. Thanks for your comment today but i didn't understand well about following sentences among the comments, such as "Don't be like" and "Be yourself". And Homework today is too difficult but i could see a little the difficulty of correcting a others mistakes. Thanks for your efforts to correct my mistakes again. = body = 1. He was carrying too much luggage. 2. Have you got any new information? 3. This material is more soft than that one. 4. The new car of Karthik is red one. 5. This is her umbrella. 6. We went to see a movie yesterday. Movie was very good. 7. He is the best batsman in the world. 8. That TV set costed 500 dollars to me. 9. The elephant is black. 10.Honesty is a virtue.

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Hello OH!! I know you want to study and enhance your skills. Don\'t be like others means imitate other people. Be yourself means just do what you want. Feel comfortable!!! Take care, Oh!!! T. Jeny   Dear sam. >>correctI had to go working earlier due to urgent meeting. >>I have to go to work earlier than before due to an urgent meeting.Thanks for your comment today but i didn\'t understand well about following sentences among the comments, such as \"Don\'t be like\" and \"Be yourself\". >>Thanks for your comment today but i didn\'t understand well about following sentences on the comment, such as \"Don\'t be like\" and \"Be yourself\".And Homework today is too difficult but i could see a little the difficulty of correcting a others mistakes. >>And Homework\'s today is too difficult but I could see the difficulty in correcting others mistakes.Thanks for your efforts to correct my mistakes again.>>Thanks for your efforts in correcting my mistakes again.= body =1. He was carrying too much luggage. >>correct2. Have you got any new information? >>correct3. This material is more soft than that one. >>This material is softer than that.4. The new car of Karthik is red one. >>Karthik’s new car is red.5. This is her umbrella. >>correct6. We went to see a movie yesterday. Movie was very good. >> We went to a movie yesterday. It / The movie was very good.7. He is the best batsman in the world. >>correct8. That TV set costed 500 dollars to me. >>That TV set cost me 500 dollars.9. The elephant is black. >>correct10.Honesty is a virtue. >>correct

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