Homework #8
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Adela!
The weather is getting colder and colder.
You maybe surprised at this cold if you visit Korea.
Q. Choose a form of transportation (such as cars, trains, boats, planes, or subways) and explain how it has changed people’s lives.
A.
I can’t talk to the change of the transportation,
so I just would like to explain about the subway and me.
I lived small town when I was young. So I was used to go to school by walk or by bus.
I could get on the subway when I worked in Seoul,
because subway is in the only big city like Seoul or Busan.
Especially there are complicated nine subway lines in Seoul.
Many people usually use the subway to go to office or school,
sometimes I felt like I was trapped in the box.
But it was very convenient, clean and safe for us to go to our destination.
Of course, there are three subway lines in Daegu.
So I can use the subway when I have an appointment with my friends in the downtown.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kate,
~~I can see that our class is on hold, is everything okay? I hope so.
~~Take care Kate!
~~Have a relaxing weekend.
Hi Adela!
The weather is getting colder and colder.
>> CORRECT
You maybe surprised at this cold if you visit Korea.
>> You might be surprised at this cold if you visit Korea.
Q. Choose a form of transportation (such as cars, trains, boats, planes, or subways) and explain how it has changed people’s lives.
A.
I can’t talk to the change of the transportation,
>> I can’t talk about the change of the transportation,
so I just would like to explain about the subway and me.
>> CORRECT
I lived small town when I was young. So I was used to go to school by walk or by bus.
>> I lived in a small town when I was young. So I was used to go to school by walk or by bus.
I could get on the subway when I worked in Seoul,
>> CORRECT
because subway is in the only big city like Seoul or Busan.
>> because subway is only in big cities like Seoul or Busan.
Especially there are complicated nine subway lines in Seoul.
>> CORRECT
Many people usually use the subway to go to office or school,
>> Many people usually uses the subway to go to office or school,
sometimes I felt like I was trapped in the box.
>> CORRECT
But it was very convenient, clean and safe for us to go to our destination.
>> CORRECT
Of course, there are three subway lines in Daegu.
>> CORRECT
So I can use the subway when I have an appointment with my friends in the downtown.
>> CORRECT
~~I can see that our class is on hold, is everything okay? I hope so.
~~Take care Kate!
~~Have a relaxing weekend.
Hi Adela!
The weather is getting colder and colder.
>> CORRECT
You maybe surprised at this cold if you visit Korea.
>> You might be surprised at this cold if you visit Korea.
Q. Choose a form of transportation (such as cars, trains, boats, planes, or subways) and explain how it has changed people’s lives.
A.
I can’t talk to the change of the transportation,
>> I can’t talk about the change of the transportation,
so I just would like to explain about the subway and me.
>> CORRECT
I lived small town when I was young. So I was used to go to school by walk or by bus.
>> I lived in a small town when I was young. So I was used to go to school by walk or by bus.
I could get on the subway when I worked in Seoul,
>> CORRECT
because subway is in the only big city like Seoul or Busan.
>> because subway is only in big cities like Seoul or Busan.
Especially there are complicated nine subway lines in Seoul.
>> CORRECT
Many people usually use the subway to go to office or school,
>> Many people usually uses the subway to go to office or school,
sometimes I felt like I was trapped in the box.
>> CORRECT
But it was very convenient, clean and safe for us to go to our destination.
>> CORRECT
Of course, there are three subway lines in Daegu.
>> CORRECT
So I can use the subway when I have an appointment with my friends in the downtown.
>> CORRECT
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