Homework 8

2016-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Do you agree that: People in their 50s generally have better memories than people in their 30s. Explain your answer. I don't agree following the question. Because i think that human's brain will be decay as the time pass away like a bone, muscle and eyesight. But we have to keep in mind that the person who used to managed his body have better memories than didn't. Maybe It depends on how to often use brain. 50s people tend not to use their brain about something. In contrast most of 30s people will be at workplace without they are male or female. So they have to use brain efficiently to compete against other people. It is based on my opinion only. Anyway, if you want to better memoris thant your age, always think and get used to long term memory. And postive thinking also helpful to your brain.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Good evening my dear SUn... How are you?Great! Two thumbs up for a job well done! Can\'t wait to hear your voice again... Have a good night...xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Do you agree that: People in their 50s generally have better memories than people in their 30s. Explain your answer.I don\'t agree following the question. >>I don\'t agree with the following question. Because i think that human\'s brain will be decay as the time pass away like a bone, muscle and eyesight. >>Because I think that the human mind will deteriorate as time goes by.But we have to keep in mind that the person who used to managed his body have better memories than didn\'t. >>But we have to keep in mind that the person who used to mange his body well will have a better memory. Maybe It depends on how to often use brain. >>Maybe it depends on how often we use our brain.50s people tend not to use their brain about something. >>People who are in their 50\'s tend not to use their brain often. In contrast most of 30s people will be at workplace without they are male or female. >>On the other hand people who are in their 30\'s tend to because of working. So they have to use brain efficiently to compete against other people. >>So they have to use their brain efficiently to compete against other people.It is based on my opinion only. >>correctAnyway, if you want to better memoris thant your age, always think and get used to long term memory. >>Anyway, if you want to have a better memory then always use your brain and get to use to the long term memory. And postive thinking also helpful to your brain. >>Positive thinking is also very helpful.

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