Homework 8
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
What would you do to save our environment?
I will do recycling frequently, reduce using disposable tools. And I will ride public transport rather than car for decrease carbon dioxide.
강사 첨삭
Ramie, you did your homework early. Ye-hey!
Congratulations!
-Teacher Shelly-
What would you do to save our environment?
I will do recycling frequently, reduce using disposable tools.
I will do recycling frequently, reduce using disposable tools.
>>>Correct!
And I will ride public transport rather than car for decrease carbon dioxide.
>>>I will ride public transport rather than car to decrease carbon dioxide.
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