homework#8
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher! Did you have a good day? I hope you did.:) I\'ve been thinking about our class, and if we choose some topic before starting class, it will be helpful to me to improve speaking English. Because i can think words and sentences about that. Why don\'t we turns and choose the topics? How about you? This is just my opnion.
HW#7
Nowdays, Korea have improved drastically. Especially, in the semiconductor sector, i think korea is the best today.
For example, Samsung. I believe that you agree with me about that part. So, the Us President, Donald Trump can say \" The WTO should stop treating Korea as a developing country\" because of the reasons like that.
But, in the political sector, I think Korea is developing countries from now. These days, Korea is in big trouble about Japan export regulation. If Korea is a real advanced countries, Japan won\'t regulate exports. So, i think it is hard to see that korea is perpectually an advanced countries.
Just my thought :)
강사 첨삭
Hi Jonathan!
You have a great idea! Thanks for sharing. Lets us take turns about the class topic. I would love it!
On your homework, be careful on your punctuation. Analyze my corrections below and ask me anything about your clarifications.
Here are my corrections.
Nowdays, Korea have improved drastically. Especially, in the semiconductor sector, i think korea is the best today.
>> Nowadays, Korea has improved drastically especially in the semiconductor sector. I think Korea is the best today.
For example, Samsung. I believe that you agree with me about that part.
For example, Samsung. I believe that you agree with me about that part.
>> For example, Samsung. I believe that you will agree with me about that part.
So, the Us President, Donald Trump can say \" The WTO should stop treating Korea as a developing country\" because of the reasons like that.
>> So, the US President, Donald Trump says \" The WTO should stop treating Korea as a developing country\" because of that reason.
But, in the political sector, I think Korea is developing countries from now. These days, Korea is in big trouble about Japan export regulation.
>> But in the political sector, I think Korea is a developing country until now.
These days, Korea is in big trouble about Japan export regulation.
>> These days, Korea is in a big trouble about Japan\'s export regulation.
If Korea is a real advanced countries, Japan won\'t regulate exports.
>> If Korea is a real advanced country, Japan won\'t regulate exports.
So, i think it is hard to see that korea is perpectually an advanced countries.
>> So, I think it is hard to think that Korea is perceptually an advanced country.
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