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2020-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. Many scientists said \'If the temperature raises up, the corona virus disappears gradually in the world\' However many scieentisits said \'The weather/temperature doesn\'t matter with the corona virus\' Therefore I think it doesn\'t still verify exactly. I don\'t know if the weather/temperature are why, Korea is getting better slowly from out the corona virus. Whether Korea\'s the weather/temperature are warm or not and cold or not, the number of infected people had continued to increase. And many countries of warm Asia are still increasing the corona virus little by little. So we must not lean on only the weather/temperature. We must overcome in many ways.

강사 첨삭

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~Teacher Lucy 

Many scientists said \'If the temperature raises up, the corona virus disappears gradually in the world\'
>>CORRECT!
However many scieentisits said \'The weather/temperature doesn\'t matter with the corona virus\'
>>However, many scientists said \'The weather/temperature has nothing to do with the corona virus\'
Therefore I think it doesn\'t still verify exactly.
>>Therefore, I think they don\'t verify exactly.
I don\'t know if the weather/temperature are why, Korea is getting better slowly from out the corona virus.
>>I don\'t know if the weather/temperature really cures, Korea is getting better slowly from the corona virus.
Whether Korea\'s the weather/temperature are warm or not and cold or not, the number of infected people had continued to increase.
>>Korea\'s whether/temperature is warm, the number of infected people had continued to increase.
And many countries of warm Asia are still increasing the corona virus little by little.
>>And many warm countries in Asia are still increasing with the corona virus outbreak.
So we must not lean on only the weather/temperature.
>>So we must not lean on the weather/temperature only.
We must overcome in many ways.
>>CORRECT!

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