Homework

Hi Seong Won!

It\'s nice to see you back and writing again.

I have missed your stories.

I\'m looking forward to more of your work.

I\'ll talk to you tomorrow!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

The girls popular hobby is collect their fevorite singers pictures or listen to their songs.
>> A popular hobby for girls in Korea is collecting pictures of their favorite singers and listening to their songs.
And also they are very interested in toilette.
>> Correct
The reason I put \'they\' and \'their\' is because I\'m not interested in those to things.
>> The reason I put \'they\' and \'their\' is because I\'m not interested in those things.
Anyway, in our country, most girls are very interested at make themselves look pretty, and love their fevorite singers.
>> Anyway, in our country, most girls are very interested in making themselves look pretty, and they love their favorite singers.
And that is the assort of the girl\'s hobbys in our country.
>> These are the most common hobbies of girls in this country.
But I\'m not interested in those two.

>> Correct