Homework

Hi Seong Won!

That is a very interesting activity.

Only you can come up with that^^

Please look at the corrections below.

Always be careful with your articles and spelling.

Till next time!

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, I would like to try wand making.

>> Correct
It\'s very popular to Harry Potter fens.
>> It\'s very popular among Harry Potter fans.
And I\'m the very big fen of Harry Potter.
>> And I\'m a very big fan of Harry Potter.
Besides, self wand making is DIY, so it\'s more meanful then the products that are made by a factory.
>> Besides, wand making is something I can do for myself, so it\'s more meaningful than the products that are made in a factory.
And wand making requires skills, so that can help me to improve more hand skill.

>> And wand making requires skills, so that can help me to improve my own.