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2018-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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My favorite comic book is 'date revolution'. Because I sometimes read them, it is very interesting. And, I like 'Crack' in the webtoon, too. It is a horror story. I don't read webtoon and comic books every day. I read them once in two weeks. But, that's okay. I am happy to read it.

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My favorite comic book is \'date revolution\'.

>> CORRECT.


Because I sometimes read them, it is very interesting.

>> It\'s very interesting. But, I read them sometimes.


And, I like \'Crack\' in the webtoon, too.

>> I also like the Webtoon \"Crack\" too!


It is a horror story.

>> CORRECT.


I don\'t read webtoon and comic books every day.

>> I don\'t read Webtoon and comics everyday.

>> OR: I don\'t read Webtoon and Comics that often.


I read them once in two weeks.

>> I read them once in every two weeks.


But, that\'s okay.

>> CORRECT.


I am happy to read it.

>> CORRECT.

>> OR: I still feel happy whenever I\'m reading. 

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