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Writing task: Do video games make people, particularly children, violent? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences
Most of the games are making children not violent.
But some of the games are making children violent or strange.
The cruel games makes children violent.
But I don't play video games a lot.
I usually play mobile game.
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Writing task: Do video games make people, particularly children, violent? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences
Most of the games are making children not violent.
>> Most games don\'t influence children to become violent.
But some of the games are making children violent or strange.
>> Correct.
The cruel games makes children violent.
>> The cruel games make children violent.
But I don\'t play video games a lot.
>> Correct.
I usually play mobile game.
>> I usually play mobile games.
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