homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay Writing:
Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible.
When I lived in Seoul, I used to take a walk following the road beside Yanjae-river. The road is connected to Tan-river and then, connected to Han-river. I like the place where Tan-river meets Han-river. Because the place looks beautiful, and it gives me feeling comfortable. It looks like a shore of a beautiful ocean. So, I used to go there by walk or riding a bicycle. But, now, I live in Suwon. My place is very far from there. So, I can't go there when I want to go. I miss the place.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jake! Thank you very much for sending in your composition. Please take note of the corrections and feel free to ask questions later.
T. Gracelyn
When I lived in Seoul, I used to take a walk following the road beside Yanjae-river.
>>correct
The road is connected to Tan-river and then connected to Han-river.
>>The road is connected to Tan River and it is also connected to Han River.
I like the place where Tan-river meets Han-river.
Because the place looks beautiful, and it gives me feeling comfortable.
>>I like the place where Tan River and Han River meets b
ecause the place looks beautiful and it makes me feel comfortable.
It looks like a shore of a beautiful ocean.
>>correct
So, I used to go there by walk or riding a bicycle.
>>So I used to walk or I ride a bicycle when I go there.
But, now, I live in Suwon.
>>However I live in Suwon now.
My place is very far from there.
>>correct
So, I can\'t go there when I want to go.
>>So, I can\'t go there when I want to.
I miss the place.
>>correct
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