Homework

Hi there again KATE!

Thank you very much for sharing this.

Kindly go over the corrections below.

See you on Monday!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

My favorite place to one day trip is Jinju.

>>> My favorite place for a one-day trip is Jinju.
 There is not have many tourist, altough it have many beautiful sceans.

>>> There isn\'t many tourists there although it has a lot of beautiful scenery.
 I recommand to visit there on Octobor.

>>> I recommend to visit there in October.
 Becuase Open to float lighting balloon festival in Jinju then.

>>> Because the Jinju Lantern festival is held in that month.
 Jinju have a river, so you can see many lighting balloon floating on the river.

>>> Jinju has a river, so you can see many floating lanterns on the river.
 If Jinju is too far to go there, How about go to the chunggae river?

>>> If  you find Jinju very far, how about going to Chunggae River?
 It is located in Seoul, So you can go more easier.

>>> It is located in Seoul so you can go there a lot easier.
 Although The festival in chunggae is smaller than jinju\'s festival, you can see lighting balloon like Jinju on November.

>>> Although the festival in Chunggae is smaller than the festival in Jinju, you can see lanterns there in November.