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2018-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I don't care of my teacher's gender. If the teacher's class is fun, then it is happy to listen to the class. I think my classmates think the same way. They always talk about the teachers they don't like, and there are both male and female teachers. Maby the reason I don't like some of the teachers is their subject are boring like math.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

It\'s truly my pleasure to have you back in my class.

I respect the opinion that you have expressed in your work.

You made everything so clear and understandable.

~~ Teacher Sharon

I don\'t care of my teacher\'s gender.
>> I don\'t care about my teacher\'s gender.
If the teacher\'s class is fun, then it is happy to listen to the class.
>> If the teacher\'s class is fun, then I am happy to attend the class.
I think my classmates think the same way.
>> Correct
They always talk about the teachers they don\'t like, and there are both male and female teachers.
>> They always talk about the teachers they don\'t like, and they are both male and female teachers.
Maby the reason I don\'t like some of the teachers is their subject are boring like math.

>> Maybe the reason I don\'t like some of the teachers is that their subjects are boring like math.

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