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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
The expression we learned in the book is very well directed at the theoretical and logical thinking of the person first, and then we forget about it when we come to the practical situation.
>>The expression we learned from the book is very well directed at the theoretical and logical thinking of the person first, and then we forget about it when we come to the practical situation.
But the direct experience is more real and pleasurable from my emotional experience.
>>But direct experience is more real and pleasurable from my emotional experience.
It\'s like the magical timing of our lives.
>>It\'s like a magical timing of our lives.
Our brains remember the direct experience more.
>>Our brains remember direct experiences more.
Nevertheless, it can be said that the indirect experience that books give us travels around the world.
>>Nevertheless, it can be said that indirect experience that books give us travels around the world.
My choice is direct experience.Because life is real and thrilling.
>>My choice is to learn from direct experiences effectively because life is real and thrilling.
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