homework

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~~ Teacher Sharon

My one of the best memory on my birthday is 31th.

>> My 31st birthday is one of my best birthday memories.

At that time, my wife prepared special gifts for me.

>> Correct

These were the gundam pramodel and a architecture book.

>> Those were a Gundam model and an architecture book.

These items are very meaningful on me this is because I really want to have these items and it is very hard to buy in korea.

>> These items were very meaningful for me because I really wanted to have these items and they were very hard to buy in Korea.

These items is not selling in domestic regions so my wife ordered that items from Japan by using the Internet shopping mall before 1 week ago from my birthday.

>> These items were not sold in domestic regions so my wife ordered those items from Japan through internet shopping a week before my birthday.

Thus, I was very pleasure on my wife\'s preparation.

>> Thus, I was very pleased with my wife\'s efforts.

Also, she prefared nice meal on dinner.

>> She also prepared a nice dinner for me.

It was steak and wine.

>> Correct 

It was unforgetable memory on me.

>> It was an unforgettable memory for me.