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2018-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I only saw a little accident like a little bump. The first one was a car that was coming behind to our car accidently bump to our car. our car just crushed a little. The next one is similar. Our school bus was bumped by a car. And that is it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I guess you didn\'t have that much experience on this topic.

Thank you for trying to share your story.

I\'ll call you tomorrow!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I only saw a little accident like a little bump.
>> I only saw a small accident like a little bump.
The first one was a car that was coming behind to our car accidently bump to our car.
>> The first one was a car that was coming from behind of our car and it accidently bumped our car.
our car just crushed a little.
>> There was just a little dent on our car.
The next one is similar.
>> Correct
Our school bus was bumped by a car.
>> Correct
And that is it.        

>> Correct

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