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2018-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Which category suits you: rich workaholic, worker robot, time-rich cash-poor and rich lifestyler? ==> As I am said in the morning, I think I belong to time-rich cash-poor category. From this month, my working time is reduced and there is a limit in working time at the company. We have to keep the working time 40 hours per week. It is hard to keep because my life style was a work robot. Thanks to the law, I can reduce my working time and I can enjoy my time in the evening. Nowadays I can make time in the evening, and I can do many things what I want. But unfortunately I don't have much money, so I can spend evening time with my family at home. We talk each other what we did in the daytime, and sometimes I go to the gym for exercise. I think it's a good way to save money.

강사 첨삭

I could really get a lot of useful ideas from you, James.

Thank you for always sharing what you have on mind regarding the question I share with you. Please never get tired of doing so. This is one way to enrich your English skills, my friend.

Keep it up! Let\'s save money for future use. lol

Keep safe!

-Klein-

Which category suits you: rich workaholic, worker robot, time-rich cash-poor and rich lifestyler?
 ==>
 As I am said in the morning, I think I belong to time-rich cash-poor category.

>>As I have said this morning, I think I belong to the time-rich, cash-poor category.
 From this month, my working time is reduced and there is a limit in working time at the company. 
>>From this month, my working time is reduced and there is a limit in the working time at the company.

We have to keep the working time 40 hours per week.
>>We have to keep the working time of 40 hours per week.

It is hard to keep because my life style was a work robot.

>>It is hard to keep because my lifestyle was like a working robot.
 Thanks to the law, I can reduce my working time and I can enjoy my time in the evening.
>>Correct 

Nowadays I can make time in the evening, and I can do many things what I want.
>>Nowadays, I can make time in the evening to do the things I want. 

But unfortunately I don\'t have much money, so I can spend evening time with my family at home.
>>But I don\'t have much money, so I can spend my evening time with my family at home only.

>>Unfortunately, so I don\'t have much money, so I can only spend my evening time with my family at home.

We talk each other what we did in the daytime, and sometimes I go to the gym for exercise.
>>We talk to each other about what we did in the daytime, and sometimes I go to the gym for exercise.

I think it\'s a good way to save money.

>>Correct!

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