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2018-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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My goal is buying all the goods that I'm fond of. I'm already collecting <The Maze Runner> series. And I want to collect <Harry Potter>goods and books, the goods of my fevorite webtoon and movies. But the problem is that I have to spend a lot of money if I buy all the things. Only collecting <Harry Potter> seris will make me to spend two hundred thousand won. I have to think hard befor I start to buy it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

You are truly a girl after my own heart.

I love the \"Maze Runner\" series as well.

I hope you achieve your goal.

I think it would really good for you.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

My goal is buying all the goods that I\'m fond of.
>> Correct
I\'m already collecting the \"Maze Runner\" series.
>> Correct
And I want to collect \"Harry Potter\" goods and books, the goods of my fevorite webtoon and movies.
>> And I want to collect \"Harry Potter\"goods and books, the goods of my favorite webtoon and movies.
But the problem is that I have to spend a lot of money if I buy all the things.
>> But the problem is that I have to spend a lot of money if I buy all these things.
Only collecting <Harry Potter> seris will make me to spend two hundred thousand won.
>> Only collecting the \"Harry Potter\" series will make me spend two hundred thousand won.
I have to think hard befor I start to buy it.

>> I have to think hard before I start buying the others.

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