Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
You are truly a girl after my own heart.
I love the \"Maze Runner\" series as well.
I hope you achieve your goal.
I think it would really good for you.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My goal is buying all the goods that I\'m fond of.
>> Correct
I\'m already collecting the \"Maze Runner\" series.
>> Correct
And I want to collect \"Harry Potter\" goods and books, the goods of my fevorite webtoon and movies.
>> And I want to collect \"Harry Potter\"goods and books, the goods of my favorite webtoon and movies.
But the problem is that I have to spend a lot of money if I buy all the things.
>> But the problem is that I have to spend a lot of money if I buy all these things.
Only collecting <Harry Potter> seris will make me to spend two hundred thousand won.
>> Only collecting the \"Harry Potter\" series will make me spend two hundred thousand won.
I have to think hard befor I start to buy it.
>> I have to think hard before I start buying the others.
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