Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Thank you for being consistent in your compositions.
You\'ve worked hard this week.
I expect the same dedication next week.
I\'ll call you soon!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I didn\'t kown that I pay a lot of attention before my friend tell me that I look so concentrated when I eat.
>> I didn\'t know that I pay a lot of attention to what I eat before my friend told me that I look so serious when I eat.
So I imagine the time I have lunch at school.
>> So I imagined the time I have lunch at school.
And I found out that I really pay attention when I eat.
>> Correct
I don\'t like eating with someone because I don\'t like to talk while eating.
>> Correct
I think that is because I want to concentrate while eating.
>> Correct
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