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2018-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I didn't kown that I pay a lot of attention before my friend tell me that I look so concentrated when I eat. So I imagine the time I have lunch at school. And I found out that I really pay attention when I eat. I don't like eating with someone because I don't like to talk while eating. I think that is because I want to concentrate while eating.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Thank you for being consistent in your compositions.

You\'ve worked hard this week.

I expect the same dedication next week.

I\'ll call you soon!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I didn\'t kown that I pay a lot of attention before my friend tell me that I look so concentrated when I eat.

>> I didn\'t know that I pay a lot of attention to what I eat before my friend told me that I look so serious when I eat.
So I imagine the time I have lunch at school.
>> So I imagined the time I have lunch at school.
And I found out that I really pay attention when I eat.
>> Correct
I don\'t like eating with someone because I don\'t like to talk while eating.
>> Correct
I think that is because I want to concentrate while eating.

>> Correct

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