homework
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Do you think it's dangerous putting information on Facebook? Is Facebook a good place to meet new people? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I don't have a Facebook account so I don't know it is dangerous or not.
But I think it is not dangerous putting information.
Because give and take information each other is not dangerous.
Although, Facebook is a good place to meet new people,
but We can meet a dangerous people so I think is soso.
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Hi there, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending this in. Keep up the good work.
Do you think it\'s dangerous putting information on Facebook? Is Facebook a good place to meet new people? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.I don\'t have a Facebook account so I don\'t know it is dangerous or not.
>> I don\'t have a Facebook account so I don\'t know if it is dangerous or not.
But I think it is not dangerous putting information.
But I think it is not dangerous putting information.
>> But I think it is not dangerous to share information on Facebook.
Because give and take information each other is not dangerous.
>> Because to share and receive information is not dangerous.
Although, Facebook is a good place to meet new people,
Although, Facebook is a good place to meet new people,
>> Correct.
but We can meet a dangerous people so I think issoso.
but We can meet a dangerous people so I think issoso.
>> but we can also meet dangerous people, so I think it\'s so-so.
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