homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Don\'t forget to use the correct tense of verbs [이름].
Kindly go over the corrections below.
Thanks for this!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition making!
Write an essay on a one day trip to your favorite place. Limit your essay to ten sentences.
I went to Olympic park.
>>> Correct!
I play with my friend, and listen to guide\'s explain.]
>>> I played with my friend and listened to the guide\'s explanation.
We do a treasure hunt and a talent show.
>>> We did treasure hunt and talent show.
Last, we ate lunch, and back to our school.
>>> Lastly, we ate lunch and went back to our school.
It was fun.
>>> Correct!
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