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2018-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Composition making! Write an essay on a one day trip to your favorite place. Limit your essay to ten sentences. I went to Olympic park. I play with my friend, and listen to guide's explain.] We do a treasure hunt and a talent show. Last, we ate lunch, and back to our school. It was fun.

강사 첨삭

Don\'t forget to use the correct tense of verbs [이름].

Kindly go over the corrections below.

Thanks for this!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition making!
Write an essay on a one day trip to your favorite place. Limit your essay to ten sentences.

I went to Olympic park.

>>> Correct!
 I play with my friend, and listen to guide\'s explain.]

>>> I played with my friend and listened to the guide\'s explanation.
 We do a treasure hunt and a talent show.

>>> We did treasure hunt and talent show.
 Last, we ate lunch, and back to our school.

>>> Lastly, we ate lunch and went back to our school.
 It was fun.

>>> Correct!

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