Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I will study all the parts I have to finish before the day ends.
And then, I will read some books and draw some pictures.
Or I can meet my friend and hang around with her.
But what is certain is that I will sleep untill 11 A.M.
Actually, I want to sleep untill 12 A.M.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
You did name a lot of fun activities.
I hope you get to do them soon.
You did a great job in your composition today!
Keep it up!^^
I\'ll talk to you tomorrow!
~~ Teacher Sharon
First, I will study all the parts I have to finish before the day ends.
>> First, I will study all the subjects I have to finish before the day ends.
And then, I will read some books and draw some pictures.
>> Correct
Or I can meet my friend and hang around with her.
>> Correct
But what is certain is that I will sleep untill 11 A.M.
>> Correct
Actually, I want to sleep untill 12 A.M.
>> Correct
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