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Good day!
I am glad you finally realized what you have to prioritize, James. Thank you for sharing. This reminded me of what I have to so as well.
We should always strive to be better.
I hope that you are having another wonderful day.
Stay safe and sound!
-Klein-
How could we start our week right?
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I hope that I want to start our week right.
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For that, I have to make plans what I will do for next week.
>>For that, I have to make plans for what I will do next week.
In my case, for right week, I check my e-mail on Sunday night.
>>In my case, for the right week, I check my e-mail on Sunday night.
Sometimes there is an emergency message, so I will prepare something for it.
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And making plans are very important to start our week right.
>>And making plans is very important to start our week right.
So I make plans for a week.
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It contains what is important and what is to be done quickly.
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Sometimes I have to decide when I will go to the business trip for my work.
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From now on, I will make a target for my personal life.
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What I have to do during new week individually?
>>What do I have to do during the new week individually?
I always focused on my work, so I didn\'t concern about it and I didn\'t make times for my life.
>>I always focused on my work, so I wasn\'t concerned about it and didn\'t make time for my life/ myself.
Nowadays I found it\'s not good.
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So for a right week, I will make plans for working and for my life.
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