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2018-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How could we start our week right? ==> I hope that I want to start our week right. For that, I have to make plans what I will do for next week. In my case, for right week, I check my e-mail on Sunday night. Sometimes there is an emergency message, so I will prepare something for it. And making plans are very important to start our week right. So I make plans for a week. It contains what is important and what is to be done quickly. Sometimes I have to decide when I will go to the business trip for my work. From now on, I will make a target for my personal life. What I have to do during new week individually? I always focused on my work, so I didn't concern about it and I didn't make times for my life. Nowadays I found it's not good. So for a right week, I will make plans for working and for my life.

강사 첨삭

Good day!

I am glad you finally realized what you have to prioritize, James. Thank you for sharing. This reminded me of what I have to so as well.

We should always strive to be better.

I hope that you are having another wonderful day.

Stay safe and sound!

-Klein-

How could we start our week right?
 ==> 
I hope that I want to start our week right.

>>Correct
 For that, I have to make plans what I will do for next week.

>>For that, I have to make plans for what I will do next week.
 In my case, for right week, I check my e-mail on Sunday night.

>>In my case, for the right week, I check my e-mail on Sunday night.
 Sometimes there is an emergency message, so I will prepare something for it.

>>Correct
 And making plans are very important to start our week right.

>>And making plans is very important to start our week right.
 So I make plans for a week.

>>Correct

It contains what is important and what is to be done quickly.

>>Correct
 Sometimes I have to decide when I will go to the business trip for my work.
>>Correct

From now on, I will make a target for my personal life.
>>Correct 

What I have to do during new week individually?
>>What do I have to do during the new week individually? 

I always focused on my work, so I didn\'t concern about it and I didn\'t make times for my life.
>>I always focused on my work, so I wasn\'t concerned about it and didn\'t make time for my life/ myself. 

Nowadays I found it\'s not good.
>>Correct 

So for a right week, I will make plans for working and for my life.

>>Correct

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