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2018-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Composition writing! In your opinion, what causes BULLYING? Write an essay which is not more than ten sentences. I think afraid and show off bad guy's strong is causes bullying.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Thanks for this but I hope you\'ll expand your answer next time.

See you!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition writing!
In your opinion, what causes BULLYING? Write an essay which is not more than ten sentences.

I think afraid and show off bad guy\'s strong is causes bullying.

>>> I think the cause of bullying is popularity and power. Bullies think that they can increase their popularity and power by bullying others especially those weak ones.

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