Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It means eating an apple is good for the health.
Actually, eating an apple make the person healthy.
It has many vitamins that our body needs.
There are many bywords of apple.
It is good to look for them.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
I hope that you eat lots of fruits to keep you healthy.
You are right about the meaning of the statement.
I hope you live its message every day.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It means eating an apple is good for the health.
>> It means eating apples is good for health.
Actually, eating an apple make the person healthy.
>> Actually, eating an apple makes a person healthy.
It has many vitamins that our body needs.
>> It has different vitamins that our body needs.
There are many bywords of apple.
>> There are many benefits that one can get from eating apples.
It is good to look for them.
>> Correct
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