Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thanks for always sharing your thoughts about every question I throw at you, James. Thank you very much!
If you really want to see the blue sky, please come here. lol Think about it. ^_^
I want you to know that I always wish you and your family well.
All the best!
-Klein-
What are the things that you want to see every day?
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I want to see my family everyday.
>>Correct (every day)
My daughter always asks me when she goes to bed, what time I will come back home tomorrow.
>>Correct
Nowadays, I arrive at home early in the evening. so I can make time to talk with my daughter and wife.
>>Nowadays, I arrive home early in the evening, so I can make time to talk with my daughter and my wife.
It is good to me and the change makes my family happy.
>>Correct
I also want to see the blue sky.
>>Correct
When I was young, it is easy to see the blue sky.
>>When I was young, it was easy to see the blue sky. (past tense)
But In present, air pollution is serious problem so we cannot see the blue sky easily.
>>But at present, air pollution is a serious problem, so we cannot see the blue sky easily.
In weather forecasting, the announcer gives information about the air condition like a micro dust percentage.
>>In the weather forecast, the announcer gives information about the air condition like the microdust percentage.
The micro dust gives us bad effect, so a lot of people wear mask for their health.
>>The microdust affects us badly, so a lot of people wear a mask for their health.
Because of air pollution, I cannot see the blue sky everyday.
>>Correct (every day)
If I can see the blue sky everyday, I will feel good emotion.
>>If I can see the blue sky every day, I will have good emotion.
>>If I can see the blue sky every day, I will feel good.
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