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Hello [이름],
Thank you so much for giving your ideas on the question from your homework yesterday.
I appreciate it a lot!
Please keep up the good work and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
QUESTION: Please share your idea on why people should study English?
I think that language is very attractive thing to share the each idea they have.
>>I think that a language, is a very attractive way, to share with each other on some of the ideas we each have.
Of course, there are so many language in the world but English is mandatory item.
>>Of course, there are so many languages in the world. But English is a mandatory one.
to make a relationshop and extend the current position of me as a tool.
>>I can use this as a tool to create relationships and to further my current position in the company.
Thanks Elly~ :)
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