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Hello [이름],
Thank you so much for always sharing your opinions.
I appreciate it a lot!
Please keep up the good work and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
QUESTION: Do your extended family members come to your house sometimes?
Ohm...not quite often, because we are each living far a way.
>>Ummm...not quite often, because we all live far from each other.
After get marry , we focus on our own family and meet jest several time a year for such a thanks giving day and luna day.
>>After I got married, each of us focused on our own families. We just meet several times a year on such days like Thanksgiving Day and Lunar New Year’s Day.
Or special family event.
>>Or on special family events.
Instead of them, i try to say hello to them by phone whenever i have time.
>>Instead of them calling me, I try to initiate a phone call just to say hello to them, whenever I have time.
Yes .. I think this maybe is caused by my personality.
>>Yes. I think, this may be caused by my open personality.
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