Homework

2018-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Homework. Do your extended family members come to your house sometimes? Ohm...not quite often, because we are each living far a way . After get marry , we focus on our own family and meet jest several time a year for such a thanks giving day and luna day. Or special family event. Instead of them, i try to say hello to them by phone whenever i have time. Yes .. I think this maybe is caused by my personality.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you so much for always sharing your opinions.

I appreciate it a lot!

Please keep up the good work and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

QUESTION: Do your extended family members come to your house sometimes?

Ohm...not quite often, because we are each living far a way.

>>Ummm...not quite often, because we all live far from each other.

After get marry , we focus on our own family and meet jest several time a year for such a thanks giving day and luna day.

>>After I got married, each of us focused on our own families. We just meet several times a year on such days like Thanksgiving Day and Lunar New Year’s Day.

Or special family event.

>>Or on special family events.

Instead of them, i try to say hello to them by phone whenever i have time.

>>Instead of them calling me, I try to initiate a phone call just to say hello to them, whenever I have time.

Yes .. I think this maybe is caused by my personality.

>>Yes. I think, this may be caused by my open personality.

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