homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Good morning. Thank your time in answering your homework. Thank you also for recommending these must-try foods. I am pretty sure that it\'s delicious and I would really love it because I like eating seafood.
Anyway, done correcting your composition. Your errors are just minimal. Check them out. There\'s nothing wrong with the grammar, just your sentence structure. Please be careful with the proper punctuations and capitalization.
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~~May~~
Ulsan city is very famous in korea for whale meat. Many people want to eat whale meat when they come here. So people here try to serve the meat But it is very expensive And I don\'t eat that meat.
>> Ulsan city is very famous in South Korea for whale meat. Many people want to eat whale meat when they go here. So people in this city try to serve the meat but it is very expensive and I don\'t eat it.
Raw fish is also popular in Ulsan Because our city is located on the beach. The cost is around fifty thousand won a plate. If you visit Ulsan, I will buy you raw fish.
>> Raw fish is also popular because our city is located near the beach. The cost is around fifty thousand won per plate. If you want to visit Ulsan, I will buy you raw fish.
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