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2018-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I will spend my month doing everything I want to do. I will go to the Harry Potter studios in London. It was where I want to go since I was ten. Then I will see the beautiful places of my country. And I will meet my friends and have a good time. And then, I will have a good time with my family, too.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

You really did a good job here.

Your sentences are correctly structured.

Please keep it up.

The movies I was telling you about were: A Series of Unfortunate Events, I Kill Giants and Divergent.

The series I mentioned is called, Stranger Things.

I\'ll call you tomorrow.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I will spend my month doing everything I want to do.
>> Correct
I will go to the Harry Potter studios in London.
>> Correct
It was where I want to go since I was ten.
>> It\'s where I ever wanted to go since I was ten.
Then I will see the beautiful places of my country.
>> Correct
And I will meet my friends and have a good time.
>> Correct
And then, I will have a good time with my family, too.

>> Correct

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