Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
You really did a good job here.
Your sentences are correctly structured.
Please keep it up.
The movies I was telling you about were: A Series of Unfortunate Events, I Kill Giants and Divergent.
The series I mentioned is called, Stranger Things.
I\'ll call you tomorrow.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I will spend my month doing everything I want to do.
>> Correct
I will go to the Harry Potter studios in London.
>> Correct
It was where I want to go since I was ten.
>> It\'s where I ever wanted to go since I was ten.
Then I will see the beautiful places of my country.
>> Correct
And I will meet my friends and have a good time.
>> Correct
And then, I will have a good time with my family, too.
>> Correct
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