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2018-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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What should we look forward to in the coming days? ==> I look forward to be a rich person in the near future. If I were a rich man, I will do everything what I want. For example, I can go travel with my family and I can enjoy my time by myself. Also I imagine that I play golf with my friends in the field on weekday. Spending time with my family or my friends is the best thing that I want to do. In order to be a rich person, I have to invest stocks, real estate, or buy buildings cheaply. Unfortunately I don't have much money, it is very difficult thing to me. So I just think that I become a rich man. Although it is imagine, it gives me a pleasure. A pleasant imagination can relieve stress.

강사 첨삭

Are you feeling stressed out?

Please have some happy thoughts again, James, just like what you shared here.

Better yet, think about your children, especially your daughter. I know that would make you smile.

Once again, thank you for sharing!

Have a good one!

-Klein-

What should we look forward to in the coming days?
 ==> 
I look forward to be a rich person in the near future.

>>I look forward to being a rich person in the near future.
 If I were a rich man, I will do everything what I want.

>>If I were a rich man, I will do everything I want.
 For example, I can go travel with my family and I can enjoy my time by myself.

>>Correct
 Also I imagine that I play golf with my friends in the field on weekday.

>>Correct
 Spending time with my family or my friends is the best thing that I want to do.

>>Correct
 In order to be a rich person, I have to invest stocks, real estate, or buy buildings cheaply.

>>Correct
 Unfortunately I don\'t have much money, it is very difficult thing to me.

>>Unfortunately, I don\'t have much money, so it is a very difficult thing for me.
 So I just think that I become a rich man.
>>So I just think about becoming a rich man.

Although it is imagine, it gives me a pleasure.

>>Although it is my imagination, it gives me pleasure.
 A pleasant imagination can relieve stress.

>>Correct!

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