Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Are you feeling stressed out?
Please have some happy thoughts again, James, just like what you shared here.
Better yet, think about your children, especially your daughter. I know that would make you smile.
Once again, thank you for sharing!
Have a good one!
-Klein-
What should we look forward to in the coming days?
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I look forward to be a rich person in the near future.
>>I look forward to being a rich person in the near future.
If I were a rich man, I will do everything what I want.
>>If I were a rich man, I will do everything I want.
For example, I can go travel with my family and I can enjoy my time by myself.
>>Correct
Also I imagine that I play golf with my friends in the field on weekday.
>>Correct
Spending time with my family or my friends is the best thing that I want to do.
>>Correct
In order to be a rich person, I have to invest stocks, real estate, or buy buildings cheaply.
>>Correct
Unfortunately I don\'t have much money, it is very difficult thing to me.
>>Unfortunately, I don\'t have much money, so it is a very difficult thing for me.
So I just think that I become a rich man.
>>So I just think about becoming a rich man.
Although it is imagine, it gives me a pleasure.
>>Although it is my imagination, it gives me pleasure.
A pleasant imagination can relieve stress.
>>Correct!
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