Homework

Hi Seong Won!

Thank you for your composition today.

Please take note of the corrections below.

I\'ll call you tomorrow!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think the person think that his or her house is homelike, then it is home.
>> I think that if a  person thinks that his or her house is homelike, then it is a home.
The mind of the liver is the most important.
>> The mind of the person living in a home is the most important.
Even the house is very big and beautiful, if the liver do not think it is his or her home, than it is not.
>> Even if the house is very big and beautiful, if a person does not think it is his or her home, then, it is not.
Big or small, what makes a house a home is the liver\'s mind.
>> Big or small, what makes a house a home is a person\'s heart.