homework
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강사 첨삭
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What\'s the biggest change you\'ve made in your life? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I don\'t know what is the biggrst change in my life.
>> I don\'t know what the biggest change in my life is.
Every day have a change my think.
>> Every day, there are changes I think.
But my biggest change in my think, it was a 4-grade-old.
>> But the biggest change I think was when I was a 4th-grade student.
Before, I just study what I do in the founifure.
>> Before, I just studied what I needed for my future.
But now, I can realize studying is for a founiture.
>> But I realized studying is for my future.
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