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2018-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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When I met the people from the other country, I was a little bit surprised to see the difference between Korean and foreigner. Well, language, appearance, like that. There will be the other differences, but I didn't have the chance to find them. I only met foreigners at the English class or just passing by. And of course, when I travel to the other country.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

You have been very diligent this week.

I do hope that you have a nice weekend.

I\'ll call you on Monday!

~~ Teacher Sharon

When I met the people from the other country, I was a little bit surprised to see the difference between Korean and foreigner.
>> When I met some people from another country, I was a little bit surprised to see the difference between Koreans and foreigners.
Well, language, appearance, like that.
>> The differences include appearance and language.
There will be the other differences, but I didn\'t have the chance to find them.
>> There are other differences but I didn\'t have the chance to see them all.
I only met foreigners at the English class or just passing by.
>> I only meet foreigners in my English classes or I see them sometimes when they pass me by.
And of course, when I travel to the other country.

>> I also meet them when I travel to other countries.

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