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2018-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How were you disciplined by your parents? ==> My parents wanted me to be a self-reliant person. When I was a child, my parents have to earn the money for us. So they didn't spend much time with me and I had to do many things by myself. And my parents want me to be a good person but they didn't interfere my life. I was a good student who did not trouble during school days. Thanks to my parents concern, I grew up well, I married my wife and I live happily with my family.

강사 첨삭

Your parents have raised you well, James!

I can sense that you are also raising your children well with the help of your wife.

I am truly inspired! I hope more people would get to know your story and be inspired as well.

Thanks for sharing!

Until next time!

-Klein-

How were you disciplined by your parents?
 ==>
 My parents wanted me to be a self-reliant person.

>>Correct
 When I was a child, my parents have to earn the money for us.
So they didn\'t spend much time with me and I had to do many things by myself.

>>When I was a child, my parents had to earn the money for us, so they didn\'t spend much time with me and I had to do many things by myself. 
And my parents want me to be a good person but they didn\'t interfere my life.

>>Also, my parents wanted me to be a good person, but they didn\'t interfere with my life.

I was a good student who did not trouble during school days.

>>I was a good student who didn\'t get into trouble during my school days.
 Thanks to my parents concern, I grew up well, I married my wife and I live happily with my family.

>>Thanks to my parents\' concern, I grew up well, married my wife, and now live happily with my family.

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