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Your parents have raised you well, James!
I can sense that you are also raising your children well with the help of your wife.
I am truly inspired! I hope more people would get to know your story and be inspired as well.
Thanks for sharing!
Until next time!
-Klein-
How were you disciplined by your parents?
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My parents wanted me to be a self-reliant person.
>>Correct
When I was a child, my parents have to earn the money for us. So they didn\'t spend much time with me and I had to do many things by myself.
>>When I was a child, my parents had to earn the money for us, so they didn\'t spend much time with me and I had to do many things by myself.
And my parents want me to be a good person but they didn\'t interfere my life.
>>Also, my parents wanted me to be a good person, but they didn\'t interfere with my life.
I was a good student who did not trouble during school days.
>>I was a good student who didn\'t get into trouble during my school days.
Thanks to my parents concern, I grew up well, I married my wife and I live happily with my family.
>>Thanks to my parents\' concern, I grew up well, married my wife, and now live happily with my family.
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