homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Is beauty important? Do you think beautiful people have better lives? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences
No,it is not important in my life.
Although,the beuty is pretty by outwardly,but I think it is the more important to pretty by inwardly.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sharing your opinion about beauty. Stay handsome inside and out.^^
Is beauty important? Do you think beautiful people have better lives? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences
No, it is not important in my life.
>> Correct.
Although,the beuty is pretty by outwardly,but I think it is the more important to pretty by inwardly.
>> Although, outer beauty is pretty, inner beauty is more important for me.
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