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Hi Seong Won!
You have some pretty interesting ideas here.
Thank you for expressing them.
I\'ll talk to you tomorrow.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The positive effect is that we can live more conveniently.
>> Correct
Well, at the future, the cars drive by it self, turn on or of the light...etc.
>> Well, in the future, cars would drive by themselves, turn their lights on and off and so on.
And the negetive effect is the environment can be destroyed.
>> And the negative effect is that the environment can be destroyed.
Developing the technology will require many resource, and while find and dig them, there will have to destroy the environment.
>> Developing technology will require many resources, and while we look for them, our environment might be destroyed.
But there are new and renewable energy so the \'destroy the environment\' problem might be okay soon.
>> But there is new and renewable energy so the environmental problem might be okay soon.
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