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2018-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How do you want to spend your holidays in May 2018? ==> There are many memorial days in May 2018. May 1st is a holiday for a company worker, we call it May Day. May 5th is the children's day,May 8th is the parents day. May 15th is the teacher's day and May 22nd is the Buddha's birthday and it is a holiday.. According to our law, May 7th is a holiday because May 5th is Saturday. So I can take a rest from this Saturday to next Monday. At this time I will go to Seoul with my family and meet my son. We are going to see the night view of Seoul by cruise ship in Han River. And May 22nd, it's Tuesday. So if I take a day off May 21st on Monday, I can spend 4 days holidays. I didn't make a plan for these days yet but I will make a good plan for my family. Maybe we will go trip and enjoy our time during long holidays.

강사 첨삭

James!

Happy holidays!

This is a great month! Wow, you will travel. Please take a lot of photos and share them with me during our class.

Thank you very much!

All the best!

-Klein-

P.S.

How\'s your daughter?

How do you want to spend your holidays in May 2018?
 ==> 
There are many memorial days in May 2018.

>>Correct
 May 1st is a holiday for a company worker, we call it May Day.

>>May 1st is a holiday for a company worker and we call it .May Day\".
 May 5th is the children\'s day,May 8th is the parents day.
>>May 5th is Children\'s Day, while May 8th is Parents\' Day. 

May 15th is the teacher\'s day and May 22nd is the Buddha\'s birthday and it is a holiday..
>>May 15th is Teachers\' Day, while May 22nd is Buddha\'s birthday, which is a holiday.

According to our law, May 7th is a holiday because May 5th is Saturday. So I can take a rest from this Saturday to next Monday.
>>According to our law, May 7th is a holiday because May 5th is a Saturday, so I can take a rest from this Saturday until next Monday. 

At this time I will go to Seoul with my family and meet my son.
>>Correct 

We are going to see the night view of Seoul by cruise ship in Han River.
>>Correct 

And May 22nd, it\'s Tuesday. So if I take a day off May 21st on Monday, I can spend 4 days holidays.
>>And May 22nd is Tuesday, so if I take a day off on May 21st, which is a Monday, I can spend a 4-day holiday. 

I didn\'t make a plan for these days yet but I will make a good plan for my family.

>>Correct
Maybe we will go trip and enjoy our time during long holidays.

>>Maybe we will go on a trip and enjoy our time during the long holidays.

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