Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
James!
Happy holidays!
This is a great month! Wow, you will travel. Please take a lot of photos and share them with me during our class.
Thank you very much!
All the best!
-Klein-
P.S.
How\'s your daughter?
How do you want to spend your holidays in May 2018?
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There are many memorial days in May 2018.
>>Correct
May 1st is a holiday for a company worker, we call it May Day.
>>May 1st is a holiday for a company worker and we call it .May Day\".
May 5th is the children\'s day,May 8th is the parents day.
>>May 5th is Children\'s Day, while May 8th is Parents\' Day.
May 15th is the teacher\'s day and May 22nd is the Buddha\'s birthday and it is a holiday..
>>May 15th is Teachers\' Day, while May 22nd is Buddha\'s birthday, which is a holiday.
According to our law, May 7th is a holiday because May 5th is Saturday. So I can take a rest from this Saturday to next Monday.
>>According to our law, May 7th is a holiday because May 5th is a Saturday, so I can take a rest from this Saturday until next Monday.
At this time I will go to Seoul with my family and meet my son.
>>Correct
We are going to see the night view of Seoul by cruise ship in Han River.
>>Correct
And May 22nd, it\'s Tuesday. So if I take a day off May 21st on Monday, I can spend 4 days holidays.
>>And May 22nd is Tuesday, so if I take a day off on May 21st, which is a Monday, I can spend a 4-day holiday.
I didn\'t make a plan for these days yet but I will make a good plan for my family.
>>Correct
Maybe we will go trip and enjoy our time during long holidays.
>>Maybe we will go on a trip and enjoy our time during the long holidays.
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