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2018-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I do not have a person to tell all my secrets. But I can tell some of my secrets to my friend. And the secrets that I tell my friend is what I do not tell to my family. The reason I tell them my secret is I do not care if they tell someone my secrets or not. If they tell someone, will it be heard by my mother? And I know that my friends will not tell someone of my secrets. If they tell somebody, I will immediately break off with he or she.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

It\'s nice to share secrets with friends.

I\'m glad you have that going for you.

I will talk to you tomorrow!

Take care!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I do not have a person to tell all my secrets.
>> I do not have a person to tell all my secrets to.
But I can tell some of my secrets to my friend.
>> Correct
And the secrets that I tell my friend is what I do not tell to my family.
>> And the secrets that I tell my friend are those that I do not tell my family.
The reason I tell them my secret is I do not care if they tell someone my secrets or not.
>> The reason I tell them my secret is that I do not care if they tell someone else my secrets or not.
If they tell someone, will it be heard by my mother?
>> If they tell someone, would it get back to my mother?
And I know that my friends will not tell someone of my secrets.
>> And I know that my friends will not tell others my secrets.
If they tell somebody, I will immediately break off with he or she.

>> If they tell somebody, I will immediately break off my relationship with them.

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