homework
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Writing Composition:
Many parents give their children certain chores or tasks to do at home. Should children have to do chores or tasks at home? Be sure to explain why you think it is a good idea or a bad idea. Include examples to support your reasons.
I think that parents give their children ceratin chores to do at home is a good idea. It gives motivation to their childre to have a responsibility. For example, since I was a child, I've had to clean my room by myself. So, I didn't like my room gets dirty, and I tried not to make my room messy. This effects my life. When I work, I try to keep clean around my desk. So, my co-workers can imagine my charateristic is neat.
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I think that parents give their children certain chores to do at home is a good idea.
>>I think giving children certain chores to do at home is a good idea.
It gives motivation to their children to have a responsibility.
>>It can motivate their children and they will learn to be more responsible.
For example, since I was a child, I\'ve had to clean my room by myself.
>>correct
So, I didn\'t like my room gets dirty, and I tried not to make my room messy.
>>correct
This effects my life.
>>It affects my life.
When I work, I try to keep clean around my desk.
>>When I work, I try to keep my desk clean.
So, my co-workers can imagine my characteristic is neat.
>>So my co-workers think that I am neat.
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