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2018-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Q. Do you trust all of your friends? Why or why not? Answer in 5 sentences or more. I don't trust all of my friends except someone who are very close to me. This is because I beleive that relation of friends have limitation of sharing emotions and mind. This means that they cannot understand all of my situations which I had underwent and it will be the same situations to my friends. Thus I don't want to believe them as they cannot understand me one hundred percent. In addition, If I trust my friends deeply, it can be a hurt on me and my friends when they do not do which i expected such as braking appoinments, braking the personal secrets. In conclusion, I think that I prefer to maintain adequate relationship with my friends, trusting little.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for expressing your opinion.

I hope that you can open up and trust people more.

It would be a good way to live.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I don\'t trust all of my friends except someone who are very close to me.

>> I don\'t trust all of my friends except for someone who is very close to me.

This is because I beleive that relation of friends have limitation of sharing emotions and mind.

>> This is because I believe that relationships between friends should have emotional and mental boundaries. 

This means that they cannot understand all of my situations which I had underwent and it will be the same situations to my friends.

>>This means that they cannot understand everything I go through and vice versa.

Thus I don\'t want to believe them as they cannot understand me one hundred percent.
>> Correct 
In addition, If I trust my friends deeply, it can be a hurt on me and my friends when they do not do which i expected such as braking appoinments, braking the personal secrets.
>> In addition, if I trust my friends completely, I could get hurt when my friends break their promises and reveal my secrets. 
In conclusion, I think that I prefer to maintain adequate relationship with my friends, trusting little.

>> In conclusion, I think I prefer to keep things casual in my friendships and I don\'t trust people a lot.

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