homework

2018-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Regine

학생이 쓴 원문

I cannot live without books because it is a very important part of my life. You can never be bored if you have books. Books are very educational too. When you have something you don't know, you can find everything in books. If you are lost and alone, you can survive with books. I can also use a book as a pillow.

강사 첨삭

Hi! Ellie. Thank you for doing your homework today. I\'m so impress by how you express your ideas about the given question, I hope it helped you to practice you English skills. Thank you again and have a great night.

~~~Teacher. Regine

I cannot live without books because it is a very important part of my life.
>>CORRECT.
You can never be bored if you have books. Books are very educational too.
>>CORRECT.
When you have something you don\'t know, you can find everything in books.
>>For instance, when you\'re not sure or you don\'t know about something you can always find the answer in a book.
If you are lost and alone, you can survive with books.
>>CORRECT.
I can also use a book as a pillow.
>>CORRECT.

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