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2018-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What seems to be special about the month of May? ==> As you know, there are many memorial days in May. May 5th is Children's day and my daughter is waiting this day because she can get a present from us at Children's day. And May 5th is also my wedding anniversary. I married my wife in 1996 and this year is 22nd wedding anniversary. I have to prepare some event for my wife and I also have to prepare a present for my daughter. And there is a 4-day holiday from May 19th to 22nd. At this time, I will go to Seoul for meeting my son. There are much time to spend with him at that time, I am planning to go somewhere with my family including my son.

강사 첨삭

HAPPY WEDDING ANNIVERSARY TO YOU AND YOUR BELOVED WIFE!

This activity is really good. I get to know more about you and I\'m so updated. Thank you for sharing!

We better talk about how you would celebrate your 22nd wedding anniversary, my friend. I am so excited!

We should also talk about your plan to go somewhere during your 4-day holiday.

For now, I\'ll let you go, so you could finish what you have to.

Until then!

-Klein-

What seems to be special about the month of May?
 ==>
 As you know, there are many memorial days in May.

>>As you know, there are many holidays in May. (Memorial Day - This is when we honor men and women who have died.)
 May 5th is Children\'s day and my daughter is waiting this day because she can get a present from us at Children\'s day.

>>May 5th is Children\'s Day and my daughter is waiting for this day, because she can get a present from us.
 And May 5th is also my wedding anniversary.
>>Correct! 

I married my wife in 1996 and this year is 22nd wedding anniversary.
>>I married my wife in 1996 and this year is our 22nd wedding anniversary. 

I have to prepare some event for my wife and I also have to prepare a present for my daughter.
>>Correct

And there is a 4-day holiday from May 19th to 22nd.

>>Correct 
 At this time, I will go to Seoul for meeting my son.

>>At that time, I will go to Seoul to meet my son. 
 There are much time to spend with him at that time, I am planning to go somewhere with my family including my son.

>>There is much time to spend with him at that time, so I am planning to go somewhere with my family. 

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