homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Composition:
Tell about something you wish had never happened.
Like most people wish, I wished winning in lottery. But it had never happened. Nowadays, I wish that I become 10 years younger. If I was 23, I would've lived differently. I would've studied english more, so I could've lived out there. However, it will never happen. So, now I am trying my best that it will really happen.
강사 첨삭
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T. Gracelyn
>>Like most people, I wish I can win the lottery.
But it had never happened.
>>correct
Nowadays, I wish that I become 10 years younger.
>>correct OR
>>I wish I will look 10 years younger.
If I was 23, I would\'ve lived differently.
>>correct
I would\'ve studied English more, so I could\'ve lived out there.
>>correct
>>I would have studied English hard so I\'d be able to live in another country.
However, it will never happen.
>>correct
So, now I am trying my best that it will really happen.
>>correct OR
>>So, now I am trying my best so that it will happen.
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