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Yes I do.

>> Yes, I do.

I am easy person to be effected on sleeping time.

>> I easily fall asleep at night.

If my sleeping time is not enough as much as I want, my brain does not function well also I cannot concentrate on my work.

>> If I don\'t get enough sleep, my brain can\'t function well and I can\'t concentrate on my work.

For these reasons, I tend to sleep as much as I can.

>> Correct
In addition, when I sleep well, I feel good and my condition becomes better than otherdays.

>> In addition, when I sleep well, I feel better than other days.