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강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
This is another of your great work.
I would love to hear more from you.
Keep writing!
~~ Teacher Sharon
My last gift that I gave somebody is a bookmark with the charactors which my friend loves.
>> The last gift that I gave somebody was a bookmark with the characters which my friend loved.
The bookmark was the free gift when I watch the musical <Along With The Gods.>.
>> The bookmark was a free gift when I watched the musical <Along With The Gods.>.
It\'s original is the webtoon, and it was made to the movie, too.
>> It was originally a web toon, and it was made into a movie, too.
My friend and I both love the <Along With The Gods.>.
>> My friend and I both love <Along With The Gods.>.
But she couldn\'t succeed in getting the bookmark, so I gave her one.
>> But she was not able to succeed in getting a bookmark so I gave her one.
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