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2018-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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HI i\'m soyong hoemwork my favorite movie is Aladin. He is the most famous hero. I like him. He is handsome and brave. I also like his girlfriend, the princess Jasmine. She is beautiful and wise. I like the story. it has myterious, fantastic and exciting things. Have a good day~^-^

강사 첨삭

Hi, Song!

Thank you for doing your homework!

Wow! You have an uncanny taste when it comes to movies. Kkkk~

You also made A LOT of GOOD sentences!

You are AMAZING! ^^

I hope you are enjoying the rest of the evening. ^^

Now, please check the corrections below. ^^


my favorite movie is Aladin.

>> My favorite movie is \'Aladdin\'.


He is the most famous hero. 

>> CORRECT

>> OR: For me, he is the most famous hero.


I like him.

>> CORRECT


He is handsome and brave. 

>> CORRECT


I also like his girlfriend, the princess Jasmine.

>> I also like his girlfriend, Princess Jasmine.


She is beautiful and wise.
>> CORRECT 


I like the story. it has myterious, fantastic and exciting things.

>> I like the story because it\'s mysterious, fantastic and it\'s also exciting!


Have a good day~^-^

>> CORRECT

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