homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Song!
Thank you for doing your homework!
Wow! You have an uncanny taste when it comes to movies. Kkkk~
You also made A LOT of GOOD sentences!
You are AMAZING! ^^
I hope you are enjoying the rest of the evening. ^^
Now, please check the corrections below. ^^
my favorite movie is Aladin.
>> My favorite movie is \'Aladdin\'.
He is the most famous hero.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: For me, he is the most famous hero.
I like him.
>> CORRECT
He is handsome and brave.
>> CORRECT
I also like his girlfriend, the princess Jasmine.
>> I also like his girlfriend, Princess Jasmine.
She is beautiful and wise.
>> CORRECT
I like the story. it has myterious, fantastic and exciting things.
>> I like the story because it\'s mysterious, fantastic and it\'s also exciting!
Have a good day~^-^
>> CORRECT
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